FeedBack Sheets 1
This is all the feedback that we have received from the class after our pitch, however we have received positive feedback, as all the feedback comment on the creativity of the music video and liked the idea of the uses of the fireworks and confetti, the star rating that we have received after the pitch was 60% of the class rated three stars and only 40% rating 2 stars.
We have also received things that need developing, such as the intertextual references that we are using is not relevant to your music video and the use of the milk bottles are unclear in the music video.
Target audiences was also commented that the age should be lower to match our audiences and that the demographic should be a grade D to B.
I am pleased with the progress of your group's practical work Si Hin, but I have to say your blog is rather lacking in evidence of your personal contributions to and reflection on this progress. Your journal posts need to be more detailed in terms of what you've done, decisions and revisions being made and how you are achieving your vision. This feedback post should have your comments about how you are addressing the feedback added at the end.
ReplyDeleteCurrent approx grade: D